Monday, 10 January 2011

Cliffhanger

cliffhanger is about a boy called tim who is forsed to go to a ad
venture center bye his dad and tim is concernd becusae
he is very bad at sports.at first he has a horrible time but later on
in the book he starts to enjoy him slef
and makes many new friends.
Author : Jacqueline Wilson
Illustrated :Nick Sharrott
Age : 7 and above
stars :3 and a half.

15 comments:

  1. Great review!!! ebi you put more detail into your reveiw and take care of the grammer used.Also check your spelling and tell us more about your opinions as well as what happens. x ;)

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  2. Great but it would but better if you added a picture xx

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  3. hi rachel, it is a really good and descriptive book blog but it would help if you did spaces between your sentences and capital letters.

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  4. nice reveiw!!:)
    EBI: you say what you liked about the book and say what you would give it. Also you should put capitals where needed.

    :)

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  5. Nice blog rachel with really good information about who wrote and illustrated the book.
    EBI: you add a bit more description.

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  6. Make your review a bit more detailed but i do like your blog design

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  7. what could make youre book blog evn better is if you add a link to your auther or even just pictures
    danielle

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  8. yours is good but I would have liked to see a picture, high five to you girl.
    tyra

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  9. I like the book you've reviewed. Maybe a picture?

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  10. It was really good I liked how you told us about the book but didn't give to much away! EBI you could add a picture, also you could tell us about what you liked about the book!!!!!!

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  11. good blog:) I liked how you set it out, you coulg have said a bit more a bout the book or put in a picture! xx

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  12. Good Review. Would Of Been Better If You Wrote More. (:

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  13. i like the background could of wrote more

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  14. i liked your blog but to improve it i think that you could have put in more detail and added a picture...x but other than that i think that it is very good xxx well done

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  15. EBI:you made the writng more clear and wrote more and told us who your favourie character was what you like about iyt and added a video clip

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